How will we progress from the second draft of our music video?

Asking for audience feedback for the second time, we decided on the following improvements for the video:

• The interlude in the video went on for too long. We have decided to trim it down by starting the sequence at the moment when the partner sits down at the table, and moving the music forward to resume at the moment when Becky goes into the bathroom. The ringing of the phone will coincide with the beating of the drum as it resumes, tying the two together.
• The part of the sequence after Becky takes the pills is unnecessary; the audience can infer what happens without being shown. Therefore, it will be removed.
• The entire last chorus of the video has to be redone, although some of it will be playing underneath the bathroom scene.